Hi Calvin, very cool maps — I especially enjoy the abstraction in the neighborhood view and the pattern of the pools. I would just encourage / push you a little further on the “qualities of the spaces that exist in your environment” part of the assignment, because I can’t get a sense of any such qualities especially in the bedroom map. For instance, I think it’s interesting that you mapped out electronics in your room, there seem to be a lot! How does that change the space / effect lighting or energy in the space, etc? I think you start to get there with the mapping of movement in the home, and even the neighborhood (it looks a little static / quiet and maybe that is what you’re trying to convey?). Thanks!
Hi Calvin, very cool maps — I especially enjoy the abstraction in the neighborhood view and the pattern of the pools. I would just encourage / push you a little further on the “qualities of the spaces that exist in your environment” part of the assignment, because I can’t get a sense of any such qualities especially in the bedroom map. For instance, I think it’s interesting that you mapped out electronics in your room, there seem to be a lot! How does that change the space / effect lighting or energy in the space, etc? I think you start to get there with the mapping of movement in the home, and even the neighborhood (it looks a little static / quiet and maybe that is what you’re trying to convey?). Thanks!