3 Replies to “Mappings: Part3-Miyuki Takazono”

  1. The title “Disturbance in 90048” creates a dark mood and primes us to experience the map from that perspective.

    The toxic smell emanating from the ground threatens the neighborhood. The museums, shops, and cafes are a soft breeze away from its path. The people desire a manicured space to enjoy their frappucinos and designer jeans. But the odor and noise pollution disturbs their comfort.

    The map feels like an Alfred Hitchcock movie. There’s a sense of tension its subject and representation.

    Note / Feedback: I liked the version that had some of the text mangled and missing. It went well with the title and theme. I know it was an accident, but I would consider it a happy one. (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Tq5vXk0wTk)

  2. Really Nice Job Miyuki. Great color choices, all of the forces seem obvious and clear and I like the texture you added to some of the colors as well.

    One issue I found is when I looked at your PDF, the text was missing. You might to re-make your PDF so that the text on the legend appears.

    Best.

    Manuel

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