Hey Shreya – Thank for allowing me to provide you feedback on your final project! I wanted to commend the argument you laid out around Irvine being the perfect place to implement this intervention. Irvine and it’s shopping experiences are quite cutting engage and really promote luxury and convenience. Some very small things, I think prompt recommended a 2 minute pitch. I’m not sure how strict that guideline is. I also wanted to say I appreciate the conversational presentation style , it is one I choose myself. But I wonder if a little more formal might be better for a client facing pitch? To me I think conversation pitches are quite common and more relatable.
Hey Shreya – Thank for allowing me to provide you feedback on your final project! I wanted to commend the argument you laid out around Irvine being the perfect place to implement this intervention. Irvine and it’s shopping experiences are quite cutting engage and really promote luxury and convenience. Some very small things, I think prompt recommended a 2 minute pitch. I’m not sure how strict that guideline is. I also wanted to say I appreciate the conversational presentation style , it is one I choose myself. But I wonder if a little more formal might be better for a client facing pitch? To me I think conversation pitches are quite common and more relatable.