Narratives: Daniel Lau

Thanksgiving is such a joyous time of year. There’s a lot to be thankful for. I’m grateful for a wonderful relationship, good health, friends, family, employment, and a great cohort to do my Masters degree with. Every year, I celebrate in at least one Friendsgiving, which is basically a second Thanksgiving but mostly with friends instead of family. This year, I was in charge of the main dish but with one caveat. I had one friend who was strictly vegetarian and another, vegan.

Tofurky? What?

First of all, I’m not a big fan of Thanksgiving foods. Turkey is dry. Mashed potatoes and gravy are only good with butter in them. Overall, the food is bland. Was I going to subject myself to creating tofurky for the sake of this holiday? I wrote a poem about this dilemma and what became of it. Please enjoy.

In today’s day and age,
People live far from their families,
When Thanksgiving comes around,
Some don’t make it home, tragically.

Friendsgiving is a pseudo-holiday,
That brings together friends,
They celebrate holiday cheer,
They consider it a godsend.

This year I was asked to cook the main meal,
Two vegetarian friends made me consider something meat-free,
What could I possible cook that’s festive and veggie,
Is taste taken into account when considering tofurky?

So I sat and I thought aimlessly,
Could I roast vegetables or throw something in a Crockp – Oh!
My mind was filled with a delicious, but non=traditional idea,
Would my friends mind if I made the humble taco?

So I ran to Safeway and gathered ingredients,
I bought onions and tortillas and potatoes galore,
The purpose of Friendsgiving isn’t about turkey,
It’s about celebrating friendship and holidays and good tidings and more.

Receipt from Friendsgiving

Narratives: John Molendyk

As I reflect on the closing of 2018 and the potential 2019 brings, I feel all the forces of the holiday season; but overwhelmingly I feel the sense of renewal, growing in intensity, bringing with it the inevitable coming of the new year.

Renewal provides new opportunity from yesterday’s mistakes, missteps and mishaps. Why is it the new year brings even a small sense that we can let it go, put it behind us and start anew? Maybe we get our clues from mother nature and the powerful forces of renewal that allow our gardens to flourish year after year.

Something we talked about during office hours on Thursday night connected with me, bringing me to the force of renewal, connecting me to a site of importance and interest for me; the garden centers of Laguna Woods. I felt my original site for project 2 had become too broad and lacked a connection to a topic that made sense to me the way the garden center does.

Renewal is a force within the garden centers as individual garden plots come alive for another season with the lush growth of leafy greens, beans, peas and bitter melon. But you can see renewal in other ways as well. In the plots where the gardeners have decided to let the soil rest and rejuvenate itself for the fall and winter, preparing for new opportunities in the spring.

Sitting down to eat with loved ones is also an act of renewal; the nourishment, times with loved ones, the celebration of the new year as we reflect and think about new possibilities. In remembrance of my grandfather (a gardener), each year, as my family comes together, I make the applesauce.

Beans growing over a fence in fall.

Narratives: Grace Guo

I frequently get a boba milk tea before running errands. My narrative poem takes place at Trader Joe’s after I’ve gotten some milk tea from my site. It’s a common enough scene of me doing some shopping for food. However, the twist is that the story is told from the perspective of the food item I’m shopping for, which is cookie dough.

A major theme I explored with this project was the themes of false hope and unmet expectations. We often create stories for ourselves of what something will be like which often turn out false. In the case of our poor clueless cookie dough, the harsh realities are not only disappointing but horrifying and painful, ultimately resulting in its death. 

Photo I created using personal images (photo and receipt) and a free non-attribute stock image from pxhere

Poem transcribed below:

She drinks milk tea as she walks near
When she sees me, a smile appears
She reaches out and pulls me close
I can’t believe I’m the one she chose

Taking out her pouch, she checks me out
I hear the sound of freedom’s bell
Some may call this luck, but I call it fate
Beyond the sliding gate, a new life awaits

Blue skies and a warm sun that shines
Replace cold mist and artificial light
She gently puts me on her seat
In that moment, I’ve found my peace

An engine whirs, the world blurs
She’s taking me on an adventure
After a few, calm is restored
She brings me through a dark red door

Something in me begins to stir
As she grabs a pair of large scissors
Cutting me across the top
Horrified, I beg her to stop

I speak in tongues she cannot hear
Filled with sorrow and despair
She places me on a silver tray
This must be some kind of mistake

Locked within a scorching inferno
Please don’t tell me this is how I go
My chocolate skin begins to melt
I think to myself, this must be hell

This can’t be my fate
No! Wait!

Too late

I’m baked

Narratives: Robin Kang

I visit my site once or twice a week entirely out of necessity.  On most occasions I stop by Woodbury Town Center only to grab what I need as I am always pressed for time.  Lately, my motto has been quick, easy and on the go.  Dine in, dine out or have a picnic at the park, a sandwich should do the trick!

https://youtu.be/3L6aUuwQy_A

Landscape image is royalty free: Pexels.com

Exercise 3.1.2: Narratives – Cassandra Hoo

I happened to buy ingredients to make homemade Moscow Mules on my way back from taking a walk to my field site, Pan Pacific Park. There are countless places to get a drink close by, but sometimes it’s nice to make something that’s healthier and more cost effective.

I wrote a tongue-in-cheek series of haiku poems to narrate my walk from the park, to Trader Joe’s, and then to my house to make the cocktails. For the actual recipe, go to www.theholistichoo.com.

A walk in Pan Pacific Park

Grad school is stressful
Went for a walk to relax
Stopped off at the park

CHoo Trader Joe's ReceiptTried to close my eyes
Too many observations…
My brain can’t shut up

Ugh… I need a drink
So many places close by
But… school is costly

Hmm… maybe just one…
But one is fourteen dollars
LA’s expensive!

Off to Trader Joe’s
To find some ingredients
For a Moscow Mule

Hmm, but what to use?
Ginger beer’s too sweet…
Must. Make it. Healthy.

Ginger, lemons, limes
Vodka and kombucha too
And some mint will do!

Moscow Mule Elixir

Now, the recipe
Muddle a sprig of mint leaves
Until it’s fragrant

Add one shot vodka
Or be bad and add some more
Kill all the demons

Time to add some fizz
Kombucha is so LA
But makes gut happy

Add some sliced ginger
A squeeze of lemon and lime
Stir, and stir some more

Pour in copper mug
Fill the mug with lots of ice
Garnish with some mint

Mmmmmmm, so delicious
Energizing and cooling
Tingles my taste buds

Narratives: Liliana Hernandez

My site is an outdoor mall, and I wanted to connect my receipt to the idea of shopping and fashion. I know there were times, especially when I was younger, that I have gone shopping and I would find myself not trying clothes on because I thought that in order to pull that particular look off, I needed to be thinner. So there is this idea of wanting to look a certain way that is influenced by what we see strolling past the mannequins in the window displays. My recent receipts show that I am buying a lot of lean meats and green vegetables, in a personal effort to live healthy and stop with all the Taco Bell runs. So, in this collage I have the dumbbells, the yoga, the runway and clothes rack all meshed with the receipt unifying the separate images. And of course, the girl’s expression because sometimes that is what it feels like when shopping, eating healthy, or being told to do burpees at the gym.

All images used are royalty free with no attribution required: Pexels and Unsplash

Narratives: Q

My observation site was a park. People regularly bring food to this location to relax and enjoy themselves. One of the forces I observed, recreation, manifested itself in an interesting way. There is a pseudo-regular individual who sells moonshine at this park.

When given a receipt as part of the assignment, I thought about how most places are BYOB – bring your own booze. So I flipped it around to be bring your own food as moonshine is already available at the park. I then stitched the receipt and photo together as an advertisement for Dolores Park.

Photos are royalty free with no- attribution needed. Obtained from pixabay.com here and here.

– By Q aka Alex Duong

Narratives: Tiffany Tam

While going through some receipts I realized that I impulse shop at grocery stores so I wanted to write a narrative around that. On one receipt I had bought a lot of healthy items and was pretty proud of myself until I saw at the very top of the list, I managed to slip some chocolate candy into my basket. This reminds me of my observation site I chose because that area is surrounded by delicious pastry shops, chocolate boutiques and famous ice cream creameries. It is almost impossible to visit that area without leaving with something delicious!

Narratives: Serena

I began this assignment by thinking about how it feels to walk around a grocery store, picking up all the items that later appear on a receipt. I’d always rather be somewhere else, so I started daydreaming about what it might be like if my mapping site, a wildlife refuge and park, were interwoven with the grocery store experience. Wouldn’t that be nice?

It somehow turned into a song this afternoon. I’m not sure what happened and I’m very embarrassed. But since I did the thing I guess I have to share the thing.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xlw7YwiimY8

Lyrics & chords:
A F#m E7

Grocery store
Why am I so bored

Grocery store
Just another chore

Let’s can the morning breeze
That whispers from the seas
Save it for yourself

We’ll gather all the leaves
And vacuum pack the trees
Then pluck them off the shelf

Bottle up a birdsong,
Now it can be heard long
After it flies away

And package every feather
Nestled in the heather
And floating along the bay

Grocery store
The products I adore

Grocery store
Buying more and more

I’m walking down the aisle
And I can’t help but smile
At lizards in the sun

I’ll watch them for a while
Then storks in single file
Lift off one by one

And when we reach the checkout
We’ll pay with a high-tech trout
Get our change in mice

A happy band of crickets
Check our parking ticket
What a paradise

Grocery store
I’m sitting by the shore

Grocery store
Let’s go explore

Why are we doing the Geographies assignment?

Note: This is not an assignment post, this is a reflection post. These reflections might not even be accurate as these are just opinions, However,  it’ll be great if we can have a conversation around this and make it more useful. (A.k.a learn more from this assignment : )

Greg’s post helped me crystallize my thoughts on this assignment. Greg’s post is here:

Geographies – Greg Puett

Greg’s honesty about not understanding why we were doing this assignment helped me think more about this. Because, like Greg, I too was not sure why we were doing this.

1. Why are we doing this?
2. Should I leave the apartment complex (neighborhood)?
3. When should I turn? Should I time it? Should I base it on the distance walked?
4. Should I map everything I see?
5. Should I highlight everything that I see?
6. How much detail is to much detail?

I had many more such questions.

After doing my walk, I’m realizing that perhaps the goal of this exercise is to:
1. Sensitize us to our environment
2. Help us observe closely
3. See things in a new light
4. Be conscious of our biases (what we do vs. what we don’t do; what we report vs. what we leave out etc)

[Bias is a big one. For example, all of us use Google maps. Google maps has (kind of) killed all other maps. But we must always remind ourselves about Google Map’s inherent ‘advertising bias.’ Everything that they do (I think) is aimed at collecting data to help advertisers and improve advertising on their platform. Thus, their maps will always see the world through that lens. This is just one reason why other maps must persist. I think as a society we can do better than relying on a map whose’ main goal is to sell more stuff : ( Never thought about this before.]

5. Make us realize the subconscious choices we make when we are interacting with our surroundings

6. Dwell upon these choices and try to think what might be the motivations behind our choices so that we are aware of our blind spots (For example, I think I’m always seeking contrast. That is my observation bias, thus it is also my mapping bias and I need to be aware of it so that it does not impact my work adversely.)

(By the way, this ‘self-discovery’ is also going to help me in the ‘User Needs’ course and the research and interviewing I’m doing there.)

Why all this?

May be becoming more observant of our surroundings and of ourselves can potentially help us in becoming better designers? Because a good designer is a good listener and observer (thus has more empathy)? And that’s why s/he is a good innovator and visualizer too? A good designer is at peace with herself/himself and that is why s/he is able to observe and understand and create more and do all of this better?

I think there could be many more dimensions to this.

What do all of us think?

Contrasting geographies (Exercise 2.3)

I’m in India right now, meeting my parents (in Gurgaon, a suburb south west of Delhi) for Diwali, thus I did this exercise in my neighborhood here. I covered an area of two square kilometers. By the time I finished doing this, I could not help but marvel at the contrast – the contrast not just between my neighborhood in LA and Gurgaon but also the contrast between my apartment complex in Gurgaon  and the neighboring village. It is like two worlds separated by a brick wall and a guarded gate.

About turns and turning

The frequency of turns is subconscious. I mean we do not think about it and yet we do it : )

We can always decide to be scientific about when to turn and choose to turn at regular intervals of time or distance but I chose to turn based on what I saw. I chose to turn towards areas that offered more diversity, contrast and greater stimulus. (This would be my mapping bias, I think.)

As a result, I could not follow tuning directions exactly the way they were laid out in the assignment.

Go to new places, see new things, and see old things in new ways

Also, and once again, in spite of the fact that we are trying to map a geography, our discoveries are determined by the roads and tracks we follow and not so much by everything that’s out there. For example, my parents have been living here since 2012 but I had never walked the dirt-road into the village before. I had only driven in and out of our apartment block’s gates. I had never seen our apartment block from the point of view of the village. This exercise opened my eyes to an entirely new way of looking at my parent’s apartment.

Note: My Dad was also curious about my assignment and he decided to join me in my walk. He motivated me to take more videos.

Urban is cohabiting with the rural

As the suburb has expanded, it has engulfed the the nearby villages. (Where my parents live now was farm land just ten years back.) However, in spite of the suburb overrunning the village, the village has somehow managed to retain its unique character. (Eg: People have bought motorbikes and cars, but they still have their cows and buffaloes. Immigrants are using cow-dung as firewood. etc)

A view of the contrast

https://youtu.be/eZjINwboc80

https://youtu.be/4Yz5HV6gNN4

Dirt road and open manholes in the village

Gated Communities

A barricade that has been closed off now

The village serves the apartment blocks?

Most of the drivers, cleaners, domestic help, security guards etc who work in these apartment blocks live in this village (Tigra) and other nearby villages.

Immigrants

Many people have moved into the village from far off lands. Majority has come in from as far as Bangladesh. These people have had a tough life back home and they have come here in search of employment opportunities.

Farmers have become landlords, again:

Farmers from the village sold their land to the real estate companies. Now they building shanties on whatever land is left renting these shanties to immigrants who are working in these apartments.

This walk opened my mind to the symbiotic relationship between the organized dwelling units in the apartment block and the shanties in the neighboring village.

I also shot a few videos to explain and showcase some of the things I was observing.

Road has to bend: This is symbolic of the power vs process or power vs system dynamic in India. Some people are above law and  law is not even for everyone : (

https://youtu.be/hLYfa714sOU

Most people in the apartment blocks have cooking gas supplied in cylinders like these.

But not everyone gets piped cooking gas : (

https://youtu.be/qRRsnFSPPb4

Dirt roads have open man holes : (

Other sights

Pigeon feet in sand

https://youtu.be/qjHbxEzjTrw

Tailoring shop by the side of the road

https://youtu.be/bzzXmjNGrJQ

Dog Chilling

Cows snacking and grooming

https://youtu.be/aCnXHzWexWQ

https://youtu.be/dDPSSg8VNBA

The Peepal tree where people pray

https://youtu.be/ieDqmLb1LlY

Main road (trunk road)

Some other photos

Private signs stand distinctly

But public signage is rare and rarely in good condition

Workers live in the houses that they are building. It is sad that most workers who build homes for others seldom manage to build proper housing for themselves.

Clothes drying is a symbol that the worker’s family is living with them ‘on site’

Empty lots become parking lots

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Exercise 2.3.2: Geographies – Annie Luong

I am going to tell you my first time-mom venture out of the house with my newborn baby on my own. After almost three weeks home from the hospital, I think it is time for the baby to get out there and literally see the world. I also combined this trip with some time to exercise, and it turned out to be an interesting trip, with some mortify moments.

My first plan was just to walk to the park nearby our home, which normally would take me about 5 minutes to get there. It took me almost an hour to pack everything the baby needs (how many diapers the baby need in 20 minutes walk?). Along the way to the park, I got to observe different things I don’t get see when driving. It is nice for a couple of minutes to live in a moment, take a deep breath, walk slowly instead of driving, which we don’t usually do in our busy lives. I see houses with different constructions, different backyard designs, which showed the taste of the owner. I smelled the grass mixed in the fresh air.  Halfway there, my phone reminded me that Starbucks was having a happy hour discount, and I thought maybe I should go to Starbuck instead. Then the baby looked like he was not comfortable, so I decided to stick to the original plan.

After several times, I stopped on the street to take note and check on the baby, then I finally made it to the park. The baby started crying, louder and louder. I felt several eyes on me, which embarrassed me even more. There are many thought inside me: how to comfort a crying baby? Why are there so many people at the park today? Or they might think I am a child kidnapper? After sitting down for one minute, I could not take it anymore. I stood up and got home as fast as possible, passing by some other eyes that were still on me. When we finally got back home, I felt so exhausted and slept for two hours.

 

 

Exercise 2.3.2: Geographies – Cassandra Hoo

Cassandra Hoo's Psychogeographic Map

This exercise was a lot of fun! I’m very fortunate to live right by the bustling Grove in LA. There’s always so much going on there that it’s hard to really focus on one thing at a time. It kind of just hits you in the face all at once. I’m glad that this assignment made me hyper focused and myopic. I was able to appreciate all of the cool things that I have right outside my front door.

The route basically took me the long ways to Trader Joe’s. I ended up going into the strip mall that has a ton of restaurants and home goods stores. I often skip over this strip mall and head right for the Grove. It was nice to mosey on through and take the long way to the main Grove entrance. I actually never made it into the Grove itself. Instead, I walked along it’s boundaries until my final destination.

I think my favorite aspect of this assignment was the sketching. I’ve never really been a doodler, and I had so much fun trying to quickly create a visual representation of everything that I saw.

Exercise 2.3.2: Geographies – Lisa Grossi

I started my mapping from my house which in hindsight may have been a poor decision. My neighborhood has large blocks and plenty of gated communities that you can’t turn into, forcing you to walk endlessly to a turning point. I definitely got my steps in though! It was nice to explore different streets too. Having a dog I tend to repeat the same handful of patterns when I walk her and rarely feel the need to venture beyond those patterns. This assignment had me walking down streets I otherwise wouldn’t have reason to go down. My neighborhood is pretty densely populated so there were so many things to look at and see while walking. It was interesting to try to pick out what I considered noteworthy from the chaos of stimuli.

Geographies – Greg Puett

I’ll admit to not really understanding this assignment in the slightest. I’m guessing it was an attempt to make us more aware of our own environment, or maybe to get us to go somewhere new. Were we supposed to make an actually useful map, or is it just supposed to be sketches of stuff along our way? I ended up making a somewhat useful map, but its definitely just sketches of stuff that I encountered along the way. One of the most amusing things about the trip is that I started at my front door, and surprisingly I never actually left my apartment complex except for a very few brief seconds. I did find myself along the way making conscious choices to not call certain places “decision points” in order to make my trip a little more interesting, as well as a single instance in order to not walk about an extra full mile which would have put me really far away from my apartment. Twice I actually just got stuck in a corner because of the directions, which still makes me laugh. So in the end, I’m not sure what I’m intended to get out of this mapping assignment, but I did have a nice walk around my apartment complex.

Exercise 2.3.2: Geographies – Cindy Wang


(I’m having trouble making this show up normally, so here’s the downloadable link).

Start: Home
End: Compton (lol.)

The house I currently live in is in a gated neighborhood on a golf course, kind of isolated a rough looking area on the outside. If you go one cardinal direction a few miles, it’s the wealthy Manhattan Beach area, and if you go the opposite direction it’s Compton. The exercise started kinda like how I normally behave, where I leave and come back before I leave the neighborhood x10 because I realize I forgot any or several of the following: my wallet, driver’s license, phone, purse, backpack, charger, lip balm.

The direction starts off towards Gardena, which I’m always excited about because I love the amazing Japanese and Korean restaurants in the area. But we quickly went the wrong way through a residential area. This area I’ve been in several times, and seems like neat and polished rows of houses with families. There’s a neighborhood watch sign, with lawn decor like flamingos, plastic cars, and palm trees/Californian shrubbery.

I pass by a park and pretty quickly get to an area with a church, a beauty salon, and a nail salon. Signs of a rougher neighborhood start appearing – no credit check businesses, cracked roads/pavements, lots of run-down auto shops, barred windows on both residential houses and business, a hemodialysis center, speedy cash, and a fried seafood place.

My initial reaction was being scared because of all the stories I’d heard about Compton over the years. Ironically, I started to feel at home and think fondly back to my time as a student. I hail from Atlanta, and at one point in time during school had to live on the corner of Ghetto and Crack (deep in Home Park in Atlanta, if you were curious). People were regularly robbed with guns (several times with AK47s), machetes, knives, whatever. At that time I had nightmares not being stabbed or shot but losing my laptop and not being able to turn in my homework, and when I was going to get my next paycheck so I could stay a few months ahead in rent. I fondly thought back to my pink pepper spray (the little flame on the bottom right represents that), and on the bottom left I say “I’ll be ok, I think”, the phrase that I’d repeat to myself every night I went home after dark in that neighborhood. As with these neighborhoods, keep your head down and be aware of your surroundings. You’ll be ok.

Exercise 2.3.2: Geographies – Young Sun You

 

After working all day, I decided to go out for some fresh air and started this exercise at the mall near my home. (It’s actually the same site as Robin’s Project 2 map!) I really enjoyed this exercise. I was a little worried about sketching while walking, but it was fun to sketch on paper what I saw and quickly felt. Despite being there at around 9 pm on Thursday, there were still a lot of people working out in the gym, talking and studying at cafes, and shopping at the grocery store, even as the wind was blowing unexpectedly. What I learned in this exercise was a way to see the environment more broadly and flexibly. To this end, I not only saw and observed the environment, but also tried to focus on thoughts and feelings. The wind was sudden, but it gave me a natural and fresh feeling for a long time. I wanted to capture that moment in my sketch.

The mall was a familiar environment as I knew the main areas and directions of this site, but it felt a little bit different because of the time, weather and season. It was night time and the weather was very different from usual. The wind blew so hard that it made me difficult to walk, so I stopped a couple times and had a chance to sit and observe while stationary. The mall was decorated with lights in a Christmas theme. The decor was the same as last year, as it was always petty and bright. This decoration not only made me feel happy about the holiday season, but also sad that the year is almost over. Overall, I had a great experience doing this exercise and enjoyed my observation, emotion and thoughts at the site.

Geographies, Part 2: Sofanah Alrobayan

This exercise was a nice break from my usual day to day. It forced me to step outside into my neighborhood and notice things I haven’t actually paid attention to throughout all the years I’ve been living there. What I loved most when walking around and drawing out the map is not necessarily following the directions I was taking, but rather noticing what it is I pay attention to. There might have been more than one thing going on at once, but I was jotting down that one thing that stood out to me the most. This map is not specifically directional, but mental.

It’s been quite some time since I heavily doodled, but I enjoyed actually drawing what I saw in front of me. It’s definitely challenging to portray things as you see them, but it’s fun to try. Something else that was quite interesting is how certain directions led me back to where I was and it wasn’t difficult to pinpoint another observation of the same place. I truly enjoyed every aspect about this exercise.

 

Exercise 2.3 – Geographies: Robin Kang

Psychogeographic Map (Community)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I initially thought the concept of this exercise was fun and I was looking forward it.  Midway through the exercise, I was frustrated because I felt constrained by the directions. I realized I had to picture my decision points way in advance in order to produce a proper map. Even then I struggled to keep all my observations on paper.  Some areas in my map feel clustered, and other areas feel sparse which is far from reality.  I realized how important it is to understand spatial concept at the geographic scale in creating maps.  Although, I had faced some challenges, my overall experience was positive.

Exercise 2.3: Geographies – Gillian Eiserman

Gill's Psychogeographic Map
Psychogeographic Map

The experience of creating a psychogeographic map was definitely a new one, and very interesting.  I feel as though my experience may have differed from the majority of my classmates, because here in Virginia, the high was 44 degrees and we had winds reaching 30 MPH.  Perfect weather to walk around and draw a map, right?  Weather aside, I think that this exercise forced me to look at things a bit outside of the box – to use markers I would not normally notice.  This map is done from exiting my condo, and the local high school actually has their football field right behind our condo, so that ended up impacting my map a good bit, and some of my observations and “markers” are actually noises from the games.  This is different from what I would normally expect to see on a map and made me expand my understanding of what a map could be or show.

Another part of this exercise was that it made me look at other things besides normal signs and use those as delineations for the map.  For instance, instead of using the signs that mark our condo community and show which numbered houses are where, I had to use things like children playing in the street and a giant pile of leaves as my guide posts.  I think this exercise has further cemented what I have been learning in this program – that the way you think of and look at things is never the only way.  This exercise really pushed me out of my comfort zone to use non-conventional markers for my map.

Geographies 2.3 – Christina

I started out from my friend’s house and walked around the neighborhoods of Noe Valley & Mission in SF. Because the directions were random, I struggled to keep the drawing organized without circling back on itself and struggled to make sense of where I was. Eventually, I had to accept that the map is simply be just a guide to the experience and that it didn’t have to make sense in the end. I found that it the things I noted for this drawing were things that I could pick out as different from street to street such as trees that stood out or objects in the sidewalk that stood out. When something was so abundant that it became like the background, I did not feel compelled to note it, such as the rows and rows of houses or the rows of similar trees. It is only when the object appears only once or twice on a block that I would recognize it as the figure or subject.

Project 2.3.2: Grace Guo

 

My journey around my neighborhood starting from my house

I thought this exercise was a nice change of pace from my day-to-day routine because it forced me to be fully present as I took a walk around my neighborhood — something I hardly do anymore. Initially, I didn’t think I would be able to observe anything except “houses”; however, that proved not to be the case as I soon guided myself to our neighborhood park. Some notable events that occurred were getting barked at aggressively by several dogs, stepping in wet grass and soaking my white shoes in mud, nearly passing out from hunger as I walked by a house that smelled deliciously of pizza, and taking a moment to appreciate the gold crescent moon that lit the sky as day turned into night.

I find the concept of the Psychogeographic Map fascinating because it gives readers of my map the chance to not only follow me on my physical journey but my mental journey as well. My journey is not only marked by landmarks and sounds (external forces) but subjective internal forces as well such as hunger (when I smelled the pizza) and gratitude (as I gazed upon the moon). I feel that psychogeographic maps are important because they provide insight into how someone internalizes their external space. For planners of a physical space, getting a collection of psychogeographic maps created by people visiting that space can increase their empathy and guide their decision-making.

Exercise 2.3.2: Geographies, Ruilin Zhang

I very much enjoyed this exercise. It freed my mind and provided unlimited possibilities on the map I want to do. Just having a pencil and sketchbook I can explicitly express the view that’s presented in front of me, and the hidden map that I am going to include in my sketch. I chose the route I often take to go to Mitsuwa, a Japanese market that is near my home. To get to the market, I only need to walk two streets and cross one traffic light.

There are many single-family homes, apartments, and small shops on the road to the market. The houses on the streets all have distinguishing styles and are fun to look at. I also see cars parked along two sides of the street. The trashcans are out on trash days. The greenery has been thoughtfully included in the area. There are many shades of trees, and nicely designed landscaping. Every day, I hear noises from people mowing their lawns. Because the holidays are coming, winter decorations are up for the holiday season. Not until doing this fun and inspiring activity did I begin seeing plenty of details in my lovely neighborhood.

I counted my turns and realized this is rather a simple route I am taking. It takes me only a couple of right and left turns to get to the destination, the Mitsuwa supermarket.

Exercise 2.3.2 Geographies: Tara Suan

I started my walk today at the condo but when I made a left I was at my bus stop and the bus was arriving. So I got on and we made several turns that could be marked off and sketched such as the bus stop itself, the trees, the front and side of the high school nearby. The bus took me to my Mappings site, Crossroads Shopping Center. As I get off the bus, I was pleased to make a left there and cross the street toward the center. I sketched the crosswalk sign, more trees, and a sandwich board advertising open homes at one of the townhouse developments. I was working on sketching quickly – let’s call it scribble sketching ;-). It was quite sunny when I started out, and not too cold, which is good because I ended up meandering in the parking lot for a while. Eventually, I made my way closer to the buildings, and after about 45 minutes I decided my next right needed to take me into the Half-Price Books store, and then deeper into the mall. It was getting late then,  I was cold and tired. Looking back on my drawings and notes I can see the mall has a lot going on, even in the parking lot. One of the notable items was the amount of signage all over.

Exercise 2.3, Geographies: Ken Mead

sketch of a walk in Seattle

This exercise was refreshing, and got me thinking about how much activity we miss in our routine transportation every day.  We might say we know a neighborhood because we’ve lived there for six or seven years, as I have, but I discovered today new houses, trees, structures, and activities that took place just a couple blocks from me.

This exercise was also frustrating because I struggle with making my doodles look representative or at least pretty. So it was hard to capture the feeling (let along the nuances) of the neighborhood.

As with Melissa’s class, this psychographic map I think says as much or more about the observer that it does the area. There the experiences I didn’t sketch because they didn’t catch my eye as interesting, or were too difficult or time intensive to draw. And there were countless things I don’t know that I missed. And, like a game of telephone pictionary, someone looking at my map is going to imagine the walk differently too. This exercise did get me thinking about how maps often leave out the more experiential elements of a geography and got me thinking about how to incorporate those in our mapping project.

Exercise 2.3.2: Geographies: Joe Davis

Black and white drawing showing a hand drawn map with annotiatons

I navigated my neighborhood in the process of creating my Psychogeographic Map.  Fall has hit, and there was a cold and biting wind throughout the walk. Many of the elements of fall stood out to me as I wandered the neighborhood, following the arbitrary directions prescribed by the assignment. I found myself hearing more sounds than my standard walks. The rustling of the leaves, and the cool breeze blowing through the trees. I felt that the assignment helped me focus my senses. The sound of my neighbors mowing their lawns on a Saturday afternoon, or sanding down a wood project.

By following the directions, I discovered a new path that cut across the neighborhood. The experience definitely resulted in me learning more about my environment than a more passive walk might. I made it a point to not be interrupted by technology. I jotted notes down and made observations, that had gone unnoticed in the three years I had been living hear. It was nice to get out of a routine, and experience a familiar place in an alternate way.

Geographies: Kathlyn Cabrera

Geographies

There is currently a wildfire in Butte County that’s significantly affecting the air quality in the Bay Area. During my walk around my neighborhood in Oakland, I noticed the smokey and hazy atmosphere, which I tried to capture in my sketch using uneven horizontal lines. I also chose to sketch a driver I saw wearing a mask to protect from the smoke.

Another occurrence specific to my neighborhood was the recent death of our beloved neighborhood cat, Mingus. I witnessed a man passing by Mingus’ usual hangout spot shout “God dammit, Mingus!” as he read the note posted by Mingus’ parents on their front door. There were also flowers left by neighbors on the front step in remembrance of the cat who used to be a regular sight on this street corner.

Other things of note are the falling of leaves during this autumn day, the various types of plants I walked past, and the different transportation modes present – cars (some that are ride-share with Lyft/Uber/Getaround stickers), motorcycles, and ride-share electric scooters parked on sidewalks.

2.3.2 Geographies: Alexa Steinhauser

 

Psycogeographic map of Santa Monica

I explored downtown Santa Monica, California near the Third Street Promenade. On any given day, there are a lot of pedestrians and cyclists moving around, and I found that walking and writing notes didn’t get in anyone’s way. Walking along the promenade, it was a little hard to go “right” or “left,” so I switched between sides and was able to make hard rights or lefts at the intersections. I found myself noticing and observing people more than the buildings that surrounded me because the storefronts were all so similar. The architecture that stood out was the taller office buildings (which was hard to come by), so I instead focused on the environment that was created between the buildings. What I didn’t see a lot of were street performers, which, on any other day, would have been in the double digits.

I would have to admit that I may have objectively described an environment I wasn’t familiar with better than this one because I have walked down this promenade hundreds of times… everything that is the same as before gets kind of blurred out.  Overall, it was a fun experience that made me notice more architectural details that I would have otherwise dismissed.

Geographies: Kathy Emsoff

Domain Northside sketches

Okay, I went to the Domain Northside, which is also the site of my Project 2. I go here a lot and just breeze past most of the stores, usually on my way to a restaurant or to meet up with friends/coworkers for happy hour. What struck me is the sheer number of stores and all the different “paths” you can take. Families tend to take the Apple store –> snack (candy, cupcake, or popcorn –> lawn –> Starbucks route. Groups of twenty-something women a generally hitting up the fashion stores or workout studios, and groups of workers, like me, are meeting up with people at bars or restaurants. It’s amazing to me how often I come here and how few of the businesses I actually frequent. When I have some time (which won’t be for a while), I want to come here and just browse the stores. I say that, but I’ll probably make it to two before I get bored, annoyed, or disinterested. (Probably why I do most of my shopping online).

2.3.2 Geographies: Q

Following arbitrary directions was a nice change from the usual “everyday busy” and always leaving the house with clear intent. Upon reflection, the primary takeaway is that my sketches focus on items that stood out immediately or over time. Of course what stands out is my exclusive interpretation and so I would not expect anyone else to arrive at the same conclusions. For example my last diagram of the Tesla car logo was the result of observing many brand new Model 3s during the course of sketching. At the other end of the spectrum was a bunny doll wrapped in a blanket and left in a tree. Fresh graffiti was a stark contrast to what was seemingly a seemingly quiet street.

While some of the public may have been curious about my actions, most didn’t give me a second thought. This was surprising considering I was sketching with an iPad and Apple Pencil. Only twice was I stopped – presumably by individuals who noticed my constant glaring up and down. But otherwise carrying electronic equipment apparently didn’t seem out of place to anyone. Good to know!

– By Q aka Alex Duong

Geographies: Omar Filippelli

This exercise frustrated me a couple of times as I kept running inwards in my drawing and couldn’t keep it all in a breathable ‘even’ drawing. I think that is because I felt constrained by the directions plus my narrow approach and observation of things. Also, the small area I decided to do this, my backyard. May be, walking on the streets would have been better. I think that in order to do a better map requires a SPACIAL understanding of where we are going and the area we are trying to cover. In this case I just let the directions tell me where to go and I used any visually appealing element determine the stoppage point at each stage of the exercise. It is what it is because I let it be that way without forcing any decision too much.

Geographies: Joseph Hornig

Geographies Hornig

The first half of my journey, I was making very detailed observations, stopping to draw intricate objects I found interesting, and really spending the time to absorb my surroundings. The second half of my journey was spent on a major road with zero shade, so I was baking in the sun. I was also starting to walk much further in between decision points,  so I began to experience fatigue from the assignment. Whereas during the first half, I would stop to take note of something before I had even reached the next decision point, by the second half, I was using one illustration to sum up multiple decisions points.

I learned that the environment really plays a factor in one’s ability to observe effectively. When the environment was quiet and peaceful, I was alert, thorough, and at ease. But when I was walking along a very busy and noisy street, and feeling hot and sweaty, I was more distracted and hasty with my observations.

Geographies: Liliana Hernandez

This exercise actually really helped me take a little breather this week, I was stressing about everything going on and going for a stroll helped me just get away from it all and focus on myself and my surroundings, as opposed to obsessing over my calendar and the things on my todo list.

It was a little difficult jumping back and forth from sketching and walking and figuring out when my next decision point should be; I constrained myself to walking around during my lunch hour at work and I wanted to be sure to arrive back at my office by the end of the hour. This made me reflect on a tendency I have to want to control everything and make it fit, which can be helpful in some cases but stressful in others.

I thought it was interesting how much you could see even just around some plain office buildings and parking lots – I loved seeing the flowers and hearing the birds chirp as I walked, but also felt a little out of place when walking along a bigger street and felt everyone’s eyes on me.

At the end of my excursion, I found one of my coworkers heading out for his usual quick walk and we talked a little about MHCID when I explained to him I was doing an assignment for class. So, I added that near the end of my map!

 

 

Geographies: Christine Benedict

Wandering around the Park

I did warn everyone in one of my other assignments that I will probably have a lot about Balboa Park in these location assignments. It’s far too close to my house and convenient to explore. One of my favorite things about this assignment was that I got to explore places of the Park that I have never been before. I thought in all probability I would end up over in the main area closer to my house and that I have done some other assignments about. However, one of the first things that happened was a trip down into the valley and over to the other side of the Park. I don’t spend as much time over there and because of that, it brought me to all sorts of interesting spots that I hadn’t visited often, if at all.

Most of the noise came from traffic. Human noise really only came into play when I went through the disc golf course which was hopping on a Friday afternoon. The terrain ranged from shady tree-filled valleys to very open dirt trails along the ridges of the major hills. I started to worry about getting sunburned once I reached the point of no shade at all.

One of the things I noted was that there was not as much tourism on this side of the Park. There really aren’t any large attractions like the Zoo or Museums to visit. The areas were mostly locals and therefore much more quiet and serene. People were out for a picnic, a jog or just reading a book. A few times I found myself on larger roads but for the most part, I was on trails that wound behind and around the public recreation areas. I went past the municipal pool, a second archery range, baseball fields, tennis courts, picnic areas, the golf course, disc golf and finally ended in the vicinity of the velodrome. Yes… there is one of those and they do amateur races!

At the end of the trip, the Park had once again amazed me how it managed to fit so many diverse activities into an area while still managing to maintain quiet and nature filled spots in which to lose yourself. I did have a bit of an adventure getting myself back home as well and stumbled upon more unique areas in the process.

Some photos from my travels:

Geographies: Rona Matsumoto Cabrera

I attempted to do this exercise in what I consider one of the most rural areas of Japan: My grandmother’s home of Kumamoto, Japan. Kumamoto is around 3 hours away from Osaka by bullet train (6 hours away from Tokyo) or a 2 hour plane ride from Tokyo. It is in the southern region of Japan near Nagasaki and south of Hiroshima.

One of the main things I noticed during this sketching exercise were that there was hardly any designated lanes for pedestrians or bikes. Because there weren’t any tall buildings or people like there are in Osaka or Tokyo, shops and “landmarks” really stood out. The attitude and vibe exuded by the locals were also very different. Almost every person I walked past (there were only people from 40s to 70s), greeted me with a “good morning.” This is a sign that you are in a rural area because there is no way people in Tokyo will do this.

This exercise made me what to incorporate a photo of some parts of my map for project 2 just to immerse the users of this map into the world of Osaka. The people, places, and overall ambience is very different based on where you are in Japan so I will keep that in mind as I finalize my project 2 map.

Here are some photos just to give you an idea of what rural Japan looks like:

Geographies: Clara Huang

Psychogeographic map of DTLA

My experience, as you can see on my map, was greatly affected by the sun. Perhaps I should have used that as a force in downtown Los Angeles. That, in addition to several hills that I was trying to avoid walking back up, was a determining factor in how I interpreted the instructions. I ended up walking around in circles, hitting many of the same landmarks several times. I did approach them from different directions, which sometimes gave me a new perspective on what I had previously seen.

I don’t think our observational facilities can be trusted to objectively describe a familiar environment–I walk around this area all the time because I work here and take the metro stop that I walked by several times. I found that unless I tried especially hard to be aware of new things, I reverted to the same mindset that I always have when leaving work, which is to keep my head down to avoid interaction with potential harassers and get home as fast as possible.

Exercise 2.3, Geographies: Alex Rosales

Psychographic map of NoPa, Alamo Square, and Hayes Valley
Psychographic map of NoPa, Alamo Square, and Hayes Valley

I loved this exercise. From simply reading the directions, you would not realize how spontaneous and fun walking through a space can be. Arbritrary directions don’t mean anything, but when you’re on your journey and in context, you realize what direction lies ahead and have a heightened anticipation of what you’re about to observe. In a way this makes you more aware of your surroundings.

I needed to go home after meeting an artist at a cafe for my 281 interview. This location was in the NoPa neighborhood (“North of the Panhandle” park) which is on the other side of a hill from my home in Hayes Valley. I had no idea where these directions would take me– it could have lead me even further from my destination! In the end, the journey was quite enjoyable and it ended up only dropping me off three blocks from my home. At one point, I was surprised to see that a “Slight Left” took me into an ice cream shop, at which point I stopped in and got a scoop.

Drawing the map was a stylized abstraction of my journey. I found myself using different forms to simulate landmarks. For instance, when climbing up the hill in Alamo Square Park (home of the Full House houses), I found myself drawing slopes and stairs. It was a surprisingly creative feature that I did not play, but came organically as I “walked my pen” across sketch book.

Overall this activity is a great way to observe a space and map it in a way that is unplanned and organic. This is divergent thinking at its finest. I almost wish I would have employed something similar for my observations for the 281 project because I often times found myself converging on things and ignoring others that I may have discovered if I had been moving randomly through the space. I’ll try my best to incorporate such an interesting activity going forward.

Exercise 2.1.3 – Informations: Lisa Grossi

I have to preface this by noting that my neighborhood seems to only be interested in a small number of candidates which left few options. Of these scarce options, the following, which are not particularly strong or poor, are my choices. 

Sign I Like:

 

 

 

 

 

 

Although I wouldn’t say I love this sign, I like it for a couple of reasons. First, the use of color. The designer uses red to highlight “Re-elect” and “State Assembly” which are both important for voters to know. Second, the letters of his name and background have a good figure-ground relationship, creating contrast and drawing attention to the name. A nice addition to the sign is the QR code to the campaign site. Although this would only be useful for someone on foot that could scan the code, it’s something not commonly seen on campaign signs.

 

Sign I Dislike:

So, this sign isn’t terrible. It has a nice hierarchy, identifying the name first, then the election, and third the three principles of his campaign. It chunks his campaign into three easy to remember groups; “Success”, “Safety”, and “Stability”. I don’t, however, believe that the typeface choices are suitable. They’re pretty “old school” and I would argue that more modern typefaces would be more appropriate. Possibly the biggest problem with this sign though is its poor visibility from the street, the subtext is too small to be legible unless you’re standing right in front of the sign.

Informations, Part 3: Serena

So I put this off for two weeks because, to be honest, I can’t stand election signs. Before I tell you why, I’ll share one I dislike and one I think is probably okay.

election sign for Teresa Keng
This sign looks like someone just opened a Word doc, changed some font sizes and colors, and slapped in a “vote” clipart. Even though there’s not a lot of content, it feels crowded and all elements except for the candidate’s name are illegible when driving past. The use of an inverted pyramid doesn’t make a big difference because the sign itself is so boring. There are no decorative patterns or contrast elements in the background or around the edges, which makes it feel like a pretty low-effort, low-budget sign.

 

election sign for Jose Oropeza
This one’s cute. There are some creative elements going on here, like the J that mimics the stars and stripes of the American flag, and the check mark in the “O” in vote. The website link and “VOTE” text are both calls to action that guide the viewer to the next step. This sign uses the same colors as the previous one, but employs them much more effectively, creating symmetrical areas of contrast for the text above and below. This highlights the secondary text while framing the primary text. My only concern with this sign was that I wasn’t sure whether the candidate’s last name was “Oropeza” or “Joropeza”. The placement would have been a clever touch if his last and first name both started with J.

 

Okay, so I have a confession. I found something that I like better than either of these signs. It’s an election flyer that was left on my doorstep. It’s not especially well-designed, but it contains the one thing I actually want from an election sign: context.

I know I’m being a bit curmudgeonly here. This is a really clear case of “you are not the user”, right? Who in their right mind would prefer a flyer with paragraphs of text over a simple, brightly colored sign?

Raise your hand if you’ve ever googled someone’s name based only on an election sign. I didn’t think so. I guess my biggest problem with election signs is that they don’t function alone. They really can’t, because–on their own–they’re just encouraging you to remember a name completely without context, which is kind of the opposite of informed voting. In some cases, they’re intended to supplement TV ads and other marketing materials, a reminder or memory trigger for those other pieces of media.

But in local elections, for instance, it’s unlikely that you’ll have seen the candidate mentioned anywhere outside of that one sign. So why is the sign so devoid of anything relevant to the job? You wouldn’t hire someone based on the way they write their name, and that’s essentially what most election signs are. Some signs contain a one-liner on a key issue. For instance: “increase STEM funding” on a school board sign. I’m still left with a lot of questions, but at least it’s a jumping off point.

I understand why election signs are so basic: they have a lot of constraints. With a limited amount of retail space, certain information has to be prioritized. But I see very few people thinking creatively in this space, and most signs feel like copies of the “generic election sign”, with no thought to why voters should remember and vote for a candidate. (Google image search “election sign design” if you want to stare into the void of mediocrity.)

I know I sound harsh. For local elections especially, I know that budgets and skill sets are limited and I don’t expect revolutionary design. However, everyone–from local candidates all the way to presidential candidates–seems to assume a static set of rules for election signs, in a way that we don’t see, for instance, with websites or apps, for which design standards and possibilities are constantly evolving. Why is it, then, that we take election sign rules for granted?

What do you think, are election signs good enough? Are they working? If you could do anything with this medium, what would you change?

Geographies, Part 2: Sahar Abdizadeh

This exercise reminded me of Jon Kabar quote about mindfulness. He says” The best way to capture moments is to pay attention”. This exercise seemed easy at first. Because I have been practicing mindfulness, living in the moment and capturing experiences, for years. The only difference is that this time beside capturing moments in my mind, I need to illustrate them on a piece of paper. After doing this exercise I realized that I am not as mindful as I thought I was. There are many things happening every sing moment which I miss. Some are happening simultaneously. Paying attention to one thing forces us to fade other things to the background. This exercise also thought me seeing is so different from paying attention. I walked around my neighborhood for the 100th time. But this time I paid attention to things I never noticed before.

Mapping Forces and Unearthing Theories, Hypotheses (and Insights) (Part 2 of project 2) Revised and Updated

Please read part one of this post here:

Project 2: The Samosa and the Gym

Part two:

I took time to understand this project. Not just that, as I started doing it, I wondered “why we are even doing this?” I was learning many new things in Illustrator, but I was hoping to get more out of my project than that. Still, I did it anyway. I went out, identified the forces, took photographs, and recorded some videos about what I was thinking as I identified various forces. Here are forces that I identified:

Traffic (no words!)

Formal communication (mainly road signs)

Ethnicities (mainly Churches)

Businesses (small and medium sized)

Transformations (mainly new construction)

Cars (so many of them)

Trash

Traces of various kinds (but mainly un-recycled trash)

Forgotten things (public utilities in disrepair)

Wilderness (also rare in LA)

Informal communication (Mainly graffiti which is somewhat like ‘user generated content,’ where users = city dwellers)

Once I had the forces identified, I sat down and started plotting them into my base map. This took me a long time to do (I’m still finding my way around Illustrator), but I enjoyed the process and each successive layer became easier to make.

As satisfying as all of this was, it was nothing in comparison to what I started discovering was I plotted each subsequent force on the map. As I looked at my illustrator file, with the different forces stacked in different layers, it dawned upon me that there’s a way to compare and contrast various forces on the map.  I compared the forces mainly by looking at their ‘relative location’ to each other. This is when intriguing correlations started emerging. This opened my mind to new hypotheses and theories that I had not thought about thus far.

In hindsight, the layers function is also a great insight tool. It presents a unique view of an image and allows us to compare and contrast diverse bits of information. All this helps in analyzing an image in ways never imagined before.

The hypotheses I’ve gathered here might not be conclusive, given the limitations of this project’s scope and the relative atomity of my sample location in relation to the size of LA city. However, these theories and hypotheses can certainly be a basis for initial conversations about the way a city is organized and role of various forces in shaping a city’s character and destiny. This is big, considering the relative simplicity of things that I did, like taking photos and videos with my smartphone and processing them in Adobe. There’s a lot that we can do with the software tools available to all of us now!

Note:

  1. This exercise is a great way for city planners to generate hypothesis about what’s going on the in the city and then use data to check the initial hypothesis. I can easily see summer interns/volunteers doing such work with LA’s City administration.
  2. I visited my site twice to make sure my notes about the forces I identified were not conditioned by the time of day I noticed them.

Here are the key theories and hypotheses:

  1. Trash does not correlate with foot traffic:

I used to think that places with high foot traffic might have more trash in the street. However, what I discovered is just the opposite of this. Could it be that trash that is seen or reported by pedestrians is the trash that gets removed? At a broader level, are cities with more foot traffic cleaner than cities with few pedestrians?

2. Wilderness has been shrunk into a shrinking river

The only wilderness that I noticed was in and around the LA river. Because everything else has been turned into commercial or residential space, river is the only space that is left out of the scope of ‘development’. As a result, nature is trying to find its way back inside and around the river. This also prompted me to research LA river, and I leant much about its unfortunate past. First the city chipped away at its flood plains, and then many people lost their lives in the floods during 1930s. Soon after the river was transformed from a naturally flowing stream of water into a straitjacketed canal for flood control. Many species of wildlife were lost in the process. Now, the city is trying to bring all that back. They are trying to bring ‘Angelinos’ closer to the river by revitalizing it and promoting wildlife through various river revitalization projects.

More about this here:

https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=history+of+la+river

and here:

https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=la+river

3. Business correlates with traffic

Traffic congestion correlates with businesses of all kinds. These could be restaurants, small and medium sized offices or storage units.

4. Traffic correlates with formal communication

The more the intensity of traffic, the more the number of traffic signs. Does this mean that people tend to not follow traffic rules when they have more traffic to navigate? Does that mean we behave as less than ideal citizens and city-dwellers when we have lesser room to ourselves? Does that also mean we are ‘less civilized’ when we are pushed into a corner? Coming from India, with very high density of population, I see a parallel here. We tend to behave sub-optimally when there are too many of us jammed into a limited space a.k.a. unlimited people and limited resources leads to (not so charming) competition.

5. Informal communication does not correlate with foot traffic (or foot traffic reports informal communication?)

Informal communication, like graffiti, is seen in places with no foot traffic. Does that mean that graffiti makers are just expressing themselves and not trying to send a message to anyone? Or could it mean that foot traffic reports public graffiti and it is removed?

6. Transformations don’t correlate with traffic (they create traffic?)

There’s a lot of new development both commercial and residential happening in this neighborhood. However it is not happening in places that already have traffic and congestion. Looks like city planners know how to avoid adding congestion to already congested streets/neighborhoods.

However, I wish I had data to show that new development leads to traffic over time. Because such data will help us in seeing that new development in less congested areas is not preventing congestion, it’s merely postponing it.

But more fundamental than all this is the topic of land use and the defining question of “how many people are too many people for a city to be still livable?”. In this day and age, and with all the data and information available to us, this should not be difficult to find. I’ve never lived in San Francisco or NYC but looking at LA (and having lived in Beijing, Mumbai and Delhi) I can say that every city should know their point of equilibrium. Any development beyond this point should explore options such as distributing the additional population load to other cities or developing newer cities. This is what a responsible and strategically minded city, state and federal administration should be doing to guarantee quality of life to all the people in a city. Growing economic activity and prosperity that does not adversely impact natural resources and the sustainability of various social, economic and environmental ecosystems is the only kind of growth that matters. In other words, economic considerations can have a holistic outlook by factoring in economic, social and environmental sustainability benchmarks. A megapolis like LA can lead by example.

7. No foot traffic = forgotten space? (or forgotten spaces don’t attract foot traffic?)

Places that have no foot traffic are seeing sidewalks not being developed. Or is it the other way around i.e. people are not choosing to walk because sidewalks are in a state of disrepair?

8. Housing correlates with ethnicity

 

Places of worship are smack in the middle of residential neighborhoods. Do neighborhoods need these Churches or do these Churches need these neighborhoods?

As I was thinking about all this, I could not help but draw comparisons with ‘Civilizations’ – a PC video game from many years back. In that game, we used to develop basic nomadic settlements, near a river or a lake, into giant megapolis. (This used to happen over time and after many wars with neighboring settlements). The game was modeled after the development of our civilization. Now that we know so much about where we’ve come from and how we’ve evolved into urban beings, can’t we do a better job of mapping our futures and build cities that are self-sustaining?

Appendix:

Forces and time

I also observed some of the forces at night. (Night = 11PM)

  1. Trash was less visible at night, thought I could see some of it
  2. There were more cars in the neighborhood (people had returned home from work?)
  3. Transformations were quiet and inactive and could barely be seen in the darkness (no lights at the construction site in the night. Just one big gate that was locked).
  4. Traffic was virtually non-existent. Far fewer cars on the road
  5. No foot traffic at all
  6. River was dark and I could not see any activity of any kind. I did hear some people talking by the river bank. (There are a few homeless people who come to the river at night).

Informations, Part 3: Sofanah Alrobayan

LOVE

This election sign is the perfect example of the Ockham’s razor design principle. It is simple, to the point, and includes basic details that are highlighted. Notice the “for” is just hiding on the “D” in “LUMBARD”. It is very clean and minimalistic. The consistency in font makes it super clear to read. The border frames the whole sign and the line around his name ads a nice touch to tie it all together. There’s great choice of colors with the white text and border, dark navy background, and orange for his last name. The contrast allows his name to stand out. Although this is the sign I chose to love, the one I hate is more effective in sending emotions than this one. This sign only gives the viewer his name and what he’s running for. There’s nothing that speaks to you in this sign in terms of emotions.


HATE

This sign is very bland. It’s black and white. There are no colors to make it more appealing. The text is inconsistent when it comes to font (WAGNER’s font is different than the rest) and the exclamation mark is much smaller than the text before it (NOT US). However, it is consistent in capitalizing every letter on the sign. One thing it managed to do is get emotion out with the dislike icon and the size of the words “NOT US”. It’s clearly anti-Wagner. This is why I think this sign is more effective in getting an emotion or “stance” out than the sign I chose in the “love” category.


BONUS (I thought this was fun)

Why do these two look exactly the same, but are actually for two different people? How does that even happen? Is that even possible (I’m actually asking)? The colors chosen, the checkboxes, the font… every. single. thing.

Note: The signs do not reflect my political stance, but are chosen simply by their design.

Geographies: Serena

This activity gave me a great excuse to get outside for some fresh air (something I often forget to do, working from home) and explore parts of my neighborhood that I hadn’t visited before. The environment I explored had both familiar and unfamiliar elements and landmarks. I was more conscious of details around me, since this exercise was about the experience rather than than the destination. Once I reached the final stopping point, I used my sense of direction to find my way home, which was also a fun exercise.

Given that I was exploring a suburban environment and park trail, most of the things I noticed were elements from nature, interspersed with human interruptions or structures. I underestimated the amount of time this exercise would take (I assumed 30 minutes) but didn’t notice time passing because I was busy walking and sketching. I was surprised to realize, when I got home, that I’d been out for over an hour. I discovered new parts of my neighborhood, observed a lot of goofy animal activity, and got some sunshine.

 

psychogeographic map with words and images sketched from my neighborhood

Sidebar: Toward the end of my walk, I was stopped by an older man with white hair and glasses who turned out to be a retired graphic designer. Perfect, right? He saw, from a distance, that I’d been sketching and was dying to see my map. After he left, I added him to the map.

2.1.3 Informations Pt 3: Gillian Eiserman

A Sign I Love

Jennifer Lewis’ Campaign Sign

When I first saw this sign, my immediate reaction was that I liked it.  A lot.  I snapped the picture and then went about the rest of my day.  Coming back and looking at it, I can start to dissect what it is exactly that makes me like it.  I think one of the largest design principles at play here is contour bias.  Even the mountains have curves to them instead of all sharp edges, or a flat line beneath them.  I very much like the way that the curves of the bottom of the mountains is echoed by the curve of the white lines, it gives the design a sense of unity and continuity.  With the mountains and the lines, I think that the design principle of closure is also at play in this sign, because the green shapes are interpreted as being a whole entity – a mountain in this case. I also appreciated that the text in this sign was large enough to read the names, but did not make the design feel cluttered.

A Sign I Hate

Matt de Ferranti’s Campaign Sign

This sign, on the other hand, was my least favorite of all of the ones that I saw this election season.  What first strikes me about this sign is the fact that the “Educator Approved” piece appears to be covering up a pre-existing design, which gives the feeling that the “Educator Approved” text was slapped on last minute and that it was not really incorporated into the design.  I think that this makes the design, and therefore the sign, feel cheap and rushed.  This is the design principle of Horror Vacui in the real world – the cluttered appearance of this sign, with multiple lines of text and a design partially covered up by more text makes the sign, and thus its candidate, seem cheap and poorly planned.  Interestingly enough, the candidate was there when I took the photo, and when I explained I was using it as a real life example to discuss design principles, he immediately started telling me the things that he would change about the design, including making the text for his last name bigger so it was easier to see from farther away, and re-positioning the “Educator Approved” text.  It was interesting to hear that many of his thoughts overlapped with my initial ideas on why I had a negative reaction to the sign.

Geographies, Part 2: Tiffany Tam

This assignment was both difficult and enlightening. I found it difficult because it became quite a task juggling between sketching and keeping track of where I left off with the directions. It took a little bit of time to get in the groove of sketching while standing, I eventually used walls and any other flat surfaces I could find to anchor my clipboard. That aside, I found it to be a pretty enlightening experience. I walk around this area frequently, but I’m usually too busy trying to get to my destination to even pay attention to what is going on around me. I discovered new restaurants, murals and even some new side streets. I noticed this really cool art detail beneath a tree that I had not seen before and I walk by that tree at least 3 times a day. It made me wonder, do other people notice these things? Are people who don’t frequent this area more likely to see it? Am I just more “jaded” and take it for granted?This assignment showed me that I need to take off my headphones and start paying attention to the details around me. I feel inspired, motivated and even a little re-energized to design.

Exercise 2.1.3 Informations, Part 3: Cassandra Hoo

This bonus assignment was extra challenging for me, because I literally saw ZERO political signs anywhere in Los Angeles.  In the course of two weeks, I’ve been to Beverly Hills, Koreatown, Larchmont Village, West Hollywood, Miracle Mile, Westwood, and The Beverly Grove… and there wasn’t a single lawn, window, or gate decorated with political signs. I never really gave this lack of political engagement much thought until this assignment… but now I’m keenly aware of it. I believe this bizarre anomaly may be due to some strict laws… but I couldn’t find anything on the internet to back it up. If anyone knows the reason why, please let me know in the comments section.

In lieu of political signs, I have decided to analyze email header graphics instead and think outside the box with what’s in my inbox.

Email Header That I Love: 

Your Vote Matters Email Header 1

This email header came from one of my organization’s email campaigns. I personally liked some of our graphic designer’s other designs better (they were a little less on the nose and more symbolic), but this is ultimately what our internal partner chose to use. The graphic overall is clean, modern, and well-balanced. The illustration of the hand placing a ballot in the box easily conveys the action of voting. The copy, “Your Vote Counts: A Ballot Measure Forum,” is simple and to the point.

Email Header That I Dislike: 

At first glance, the email header seems amateur. The top copy, “Vote 2018,” is very blurry. After I saw that, I had a hard time taking the rest of the email seriously. The sub-headline and italicized supporting copy below “Vote 2018” is also not very inspiring. It’s too text heavy without any visual aid.  I don’t like that the section is aligned centered while the “Vote 2018” is aligned left — it makes the whole thing feel unbalanced. The the typeface, spacing, and kerning also seems like it was created in a Word document and wasn’t given much thought. Overall, this header is very forgettable amongst a sea of political emails.

Informations, Part 3: Greg Puett

Love

This sign for mayor is one of my favorites of all time. It even highlights one of the principles that I personally worked on for our list, the von Restroff Effect. With Its diamond shape rather than square or rectangle, and the firefighter cap on the top, this sign will be remembered long after the campaign ends. This sign actually won my vote, mainly because all the Phoenix Mayor’s were saying pretty much the same thing, and didn’t speak on any of the issues I care about, but that’s a different class.

Hate

This sign for school board is awful. Not because of how its organized, but because of its Color. For some reason, this pair of candidates decided that in order to stand out, they were going to use the exact same color as all the “NO” proposition signs. Prop signs have always historically been yellow when telling you to vote NO (see examples below), and been a whole range of colors for yes. (You can see somewhat below that right next to a sign is a red “yes” sign. What were these two thinking, “People will see this, and will vote ‘NO’ for us too!”???

 

Exercise 2.3.2 Geographies Part 2: Daniel Lau

Daniel Lau's Psychogeographic Map

Reflection

This experience was really fun for me. I’ve worked at my company for over 2 years and I’ve already begun to ignore big portions of my commute and my surroundings. When I went into drawing my psychogeographic map, my attention to detail was heightened. I noticed buildings and bridges I had never given a second thought to. There was fascinating architecture all around me. New buildings with circular shapes, similar to the new Apple campus, were being built near my office that I had never noticed before. I was taken on an adventurous journey because these paths were not ones I would normally take.

Exercise 2.1.3 – Informations: Young Sun You

Like

I chose this one because it is most memorable throughout the other campaign signs. This campaign offers a simple layout and color palette and bold text. It has minimal information and elements, but gives you the idea and reason immediately. The white text on dark blue background stands out well even at distances. The small star in orange, which is complementary to blue, is eye-catching. I can see the idea of Ockham’s razor principle from the fact that the sign minimizes the elements and avoids unnecessary information that decreases its efficiency, especially in the limited space of the campaign sign.

Dislike

At first I liked this campaign sign because of its visual elements and different look compared to the other signs, but I noticed an odd hierarchy and pattern in this sign. First, the name of the candidate is not sufficiently prominent compared to other elements. There is no clear hierarchy, and it doesn’t lead my eyes to the most important information. Also many designs follow the F-Pattern because most people’s eyes will always start on the top left corner of the space. I am not sure if the campaign has decided to place the water drop icon in the left corner because they think that is more important than the candidate name. Also at the distances, the lightweight and unbalanced name placement is not easily recognized and the only thing I can see is water drop.

Exercise 2.1.3 – Informations: Cindy Wang

These are the signs that are near where I live, so I’ll be talking about the one for Maxine Waters, and Jason Gromski. I don’t love or hate most election signs, and still find myself indifferent to these two. I lowkey feel like most election signs have the same color scheme and use of their last name to take up most of the sign.

Let’s talk about Maxine Waters. It’s interesting to me that she uses a deeper, more navy blue and orange – neither the traditional shade or color that’s seen in Jason Gromski’s. What’s more important is the content strategy she chose – “Re-elect” in a small box separate from “Congresswoman”, and the phrase “She Fights For All of Us”. She is the most senior of the 12 African American women in Congress, so the choice in words reaffirm and establish her authority as an incumbent in the area. The area that she is running in is mostly made of minority ethnicities, so the phrase that “she fights for all of us” makes a lot of strategic sense, especially in this political climate where the President chooses to denigrate the very minorities she represents.

Visually, she uses a harsher, serif font, with the smaller font set against white. I find that there’s a lot going on here and it doesn’t look like she is using any gridded columns to figure out spacing and margins in the sign. In addition, “re-elect” is askew and quite small, making it difficult to read. Her name and her quote on the bottom is the most visible when driving past. Perhaps it doesn’t matter for her, since she is an incumbent with a long history or service.

Jason Grom is simply running for city council, but I find his sign to use the stereotypical blue/red colors that are bright (but not overly saturated). He doesn’t capitalize his name, and the font he uses is serif but has much more rounded/curvier edges, which speaks more relaxed, less formal, perhaps more relatable to voters. For the role he’s going for, it makes sense – it’s not a seat in Congress. His name is left-aligned, which helps for left-right reading, and the little quote beneath him is right-aligned. It was probably done to avoid the little bit of awkward empty space that would occur if placed right below the ‘G’ in his last name.